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This is a storie of <춘향전>.
>> This is the story of (character\'s name)
OR>> This is a story entitled (title of the story)
When Lee mong Lyeong who is a son of Jeonlado Namone\'s leader went out, Choon Hang who is a daughter of geisha wulme is playing on the swings.
>> When Lee mong Lyeong who is the son of Jeonlado Namone\'s leader went out, Choon Hang who is a daughter of geisha wulme is playing on the swings.
Lee had seen this and make an appointment with Choon hang\'s lover.
>> Lee had seen this and he made an appointment with Choon Hang\'s lover.
However, His father was transferred to Seoul, so MongLyeong and Choon Hang was farewelled each other.
>> However, his father was transferred to Seoul, so MongLyeong and Choon Hang said their goodbyes to each other.
The new leader of Jeonlado, Byun Hak Do did not govern his village and just interested in women.
>> The new leader of Jeonlado, Byun Hak Do did not govern his village and he was just interested with women.
He ordered to Choon Hang to serve him.
>> He ordered Choon Hang to serve him.
But Choon Hang refused it, and she was shutted up in prison and was supposed to be sxcuted in Byen-satto\'s birthday.
>> But Choon Hang refused it, and she was shut up in prison and was supposed to be executed on Byen-satto\'s birthday.
Mong Lyeong became the fist of the exam for government worker, and came back to Namone for secret royal inspector, wearing beggar\'s rag.
>> Do you mean: Mong Lyeong became a government worker, and he went back to Namone for a secret royal inspectoin, wearing a beggar\'s rag.
He was struck at the news, then went to ByunHakDo\'s birthday party and fliped his topcoat showing his certivicate of appointment.
>> He was struck by the news so he went to ByunHakDo\'s birthday party and flipped his top coat showing his certificate of appointment.
He make the leader of Namone fired and saved Choon Hang and lived with her forever and happily.
>> He fired the leader of Namone and saved Choon Hang. Then they live happily.
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