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Hi Paula!!! How did you do last weekend? I had enough rest without a special plan. My company usually give us vacation for a week once a year in summer. I am planning trip of two nights and three days with my friends. We will stay a pension that is located in valley for the first day and are going to go the beach. I prefers to go the valley than the sea. The valley has a cool breeze and a cold water. Of course, the sea also is cool. However, I dislike sand that is adhered in my skin because It makes me inconvenient. The most inconvenient thing is to wash on the beach. If there is good accommodations near the beach, the inconvenience is less. However, It is very difficult to reserve it for the vacation. Therefore, We are finding hard such accommodations. Once the short trip is ended, we have to prepare the move for the rest of the vacation. Oh! Reach the limit. That's about it today. Bye!!!

Hi Jehee! A great Monday to all of us! ^^   I just stayed home last weekend. My family and I were very busy because of the new member of our wonderful family. We have a new baby. She is my younger brother\'s cute baby. I didn\'t really have enough rest, but I ma good.   Anyway, please see the corrections and suggestions below! See you very soon! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     ***PROPER LETTER COMPOSITION***   Hi Paula!!!How did you do last weekend?I had enough rest without a special plan.My company usually give us vacation for a week once a year in summer.I am planning trip of two nights and three days with my friends.We will stay a pension that is located in valley for the first day and are going to go the beach.I prefers to go the valley than the sea.The valley has a cool breeze and a cold water.Of course, the sea also is cool. However, I dislike sand that is adhered in my skin because It makes me inconvenient. The most inconvenient thing is to wash on the beach.If there is good accommodations near the beach, the inconvenience is less.However, It is very difficult to reserve it for the vacation.Therefore, We are finding hard such accommodations.Once the short trip is ended, we have to prepare the move for the rest of the vacation. Oh! Reach the limit.That\'s about it today.Bye!!!   Nill     ***CORRECTIONS AND SUGGESTIONS***   Hi Paula!!!>> CORRECT!How did you do last weekend?>> CORRECT!I had enough rest without a special plan.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I had enough rest without any special plans.My company usually give us vacation for a week once a year in summer.>> My company usually gives us a vacation for a week once a year in summer.I am planning trip of two nights and three days with my friends.>> I am planning to have a two night and three days trip with my friends. >> OR: I\'m planning to have a trip for two nights and three days with my friends. >> OR: I\'m planning to have a trip with my friends for two nights and three days.We will stay a pension that is located in valley for the first day and are going to go the beach.>> We will stay in a pension that is located in the valley for the first day, and we are going to the beach.I prefers to go the valley than the sea.>> I prefer to go to the valley than the sea.The valley has a cool breeze and a cold water.>> The valley has a cool breeze and cold water.Of course, the sea also is cool. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, the sea is also cool.However, I dislike sand that is adhered in my skin because It makes me inconvenient.>> However, I dislike sand that adheres in my skin, because it makes me inconvenient.The most inconvenient thing is to wash on the beach.>> CORRECT! >> OR: The most inconvenient thing is to wash at the beach.If there is good accommodations near the beach, the inconvenience is less.>> If there are good accommodations near the beach, the inconvenience is less. >> OR: If there are good accommodations near the beach, it would be less inconvenient.However, It is very difficult to reserve it for the vacation.>> However, it is very difficult to reserve a good place for the vacation.Therefore, We are finding hard such accommodations.>> Therefore, we are finding hard for such accommodations. >> OR: Therefore, we are looking hard for such accommodations.Once the short trip is ended, we have to prepare the move for the rest of the vacation.>> CORRECT!Oh! Reach the limit.>> Oh! I have reached the limit. >> OR: Oh! The limit is reached.That\'s about it today.>> CORRECT! >> OR: That\'s all for today!Bye!!! >> CORRECT!