Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]!
Private education nowadays, even though if it is costly, parents would still prefer to let their children have a private tutor.
And as what you have said, you have received a private education when you were young.
So it is really helpful with you and for some other people who had experienced it.
See you again tomorrow!
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
These days, most students are occupied with attending private institutes on an hour by hour basis. Do you think it would be more effective to have a private tutor, or to attend another institute?
The cost of private education is very high in Korea.
>> correct!
Many parents think that private education is needed to their children.
>> Many parents think that private education is needed for their children.
Actually, there are some subjects that need private institues such as art, music and so on.
>> correct!
Especially, English education is hot issue in Korea.
>> Especially, English education is a hot issue in Korea.
Teaching purpose and method is different with public school in private insitutes.
>> Teaching purpose and method is different with the public school and in private institutes.
I am a adult so I can study English alone.
>> I am an adult so I can study English alone.
However I have attending private institute.
>> However, I have attended a private institute.
This is because I think that I have to use foreign language everyday.
>> This is because I think that I have to use a foreign language everyday.
It\'s my will.
>> correct!
By the way, children don\'t want to go there but they just go there because of mother\'s pressure.
>> By the way, children don\'t want to go there because of their mother\'s pressure.
It\'s very sad.
>> correct!
Therefore the effect is different depending on person.
>> Therefore the effect is different depending on the person.
Finally, the effect is in their hands.
>> correct!
They need to train self-directed learning.
>> correct!
Thank you.
>> correct!
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