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2014-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I went to Da-ajeun to join the National invention contest. I slept one day in "Toyoko in hotel" I rode a magentic levitation propulsion train. I also pratice hard until 10 p.m I had a good time.

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Welcome back Tom ^_^ Finally! I was able to receive a composition from you. Yahoo! I miss this! hahaha! Wow! I am excited to hear your stories about the contest. When are you going to know the results? I hope that you will have a wonderful week ahead of you. See you in class. Take Care!Teacher Nina   I went to Da-ajeun to join the National invention contest. >> Correct >> OR: I went to Daejeon to join the National invention contest. I slept one day in \"Toyoko in hotel\" >> I slept at Toyoko Hotel for a day.I rode a magentic levitation propulsion train. >> I rode a magnetic levitation propulsion train. I also pratice hard until 10 p.m\\ >> CorrectI had a good time. >> Correct

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