homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to Da-ajeun to join the National invention contest.
I slept one day in "Toyoko in hotel"
I rode a magentic levitation propulsion train.
I also pratice hard until 10 p.m
I had a good time.
강사 첨삭
Welcome back Tom ^_^
Finally! I was able to receive a composition from you. Yahoo!
I miss this! hahaha! Wow! I am excited to hear your stories about the contest.
When are you going to know the results? I hope that you will have a wonderful week ahead of you.
See you in class. Take Care!Teacher Nina
I went to Da-ajeun to join the National invention contest.
>> Correct
>> OR: I went to Daejeon to join the National invention contest. I slept one day in \"Toyoko in hotel\"
>> I slept at Toyoko Hotel for a day.I rode a magentic levitation propulsion train.
>> I rode a magnetic levitation propulsion train. I also pratice hard until 10 p.m\\
>> CorrectI had a good time.
>> Correct
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