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Hi Jehee!

Happy Tuesday!

Frankly speaking, I am a little down now.

I have a heart problem. Kkk~~~ ^^

However, I am fine.

You must be careful.

Take care of yourself, especially that Typhoon Racoon will just be near your country.

Take a lot of care!

By the way, you did good in your composition.

However, you committed a few mistakes.

Check the corrections and suggestions below.

Anyway, I hope the typhoon gets really weak when it passes Japan and Korea.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Hi Paula!
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How are you today?
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We are being affected by typhoon racoon.
>> We are being affected by Typhoon Racoon.

Fortunately, It seems that the typhoon become weak.
>> Fortunately, it seems that the typhoon becomes weak.

>> OR: Fortunately, it seems that the typhoon is getting weak.
However, it will make us a lot damage.
>> However, it will make a lot of damage to us.

Anyway, today\'s title is \"what steps you have to take to get your destination on a trip?\"
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>> OR: Anyway, today\'s question is \"What steps you have to take to get your destination on a trip?\"
First, I have to make a plan about when, where and with whom.
>> First, I have to make a plan about when, where and with whom I will have a trip.
After such matters is decided, we have to reserve accommodations to eat, sleep, play.
>> After sich matters are decided, we have to reserve for accommodations to eat, sleep and play.
In case the vacation season that is crowded with many people, we have to reserve at least 3 months ago.
>> In case the vacation season is crowded with many people, we have to reserve for at least 3 months before the trip.

>> OR: In case that there will be a lot of people during the vacation season, we have to reserve for at least 3 months before the trip.
Second, we have to determine what to do.
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>> OR: Next, we have to determine what to do.
We usually select accommodations that are well equipped with amusement facilities.
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>> OR: We usually select accommodations that are well equipped with amusing facilities.
Finally, we have to decide what to eat.
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It is very important to decide what to eat to us.
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>> OR: To us, it is very important to decide what to eat.
We use a lot money to buy this.
>> We use a lot of money to buy the things we want to eat.
We feel happy when eating good foods.
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>> OR: We feel happy when we eat good foods.
Therefore, we usually cook in person to make delicious foods.
>> Therefore, we usually cook by ourselves to make delicious foods.
Anyway, I wish that day comes early.
>> Anyway, I wish that day comes soon.
Thank you!
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Bye!

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