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학생이 쓴 원문
I always laugh at myself.
Because life is so happy.
Every times are new and cool.
Good mind helps me to feel happy and laughed at myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Happy second day of the week. ^^
Wow, you are so happy!
And I want to say thanks for my making my life happy too.
Our class is always meaningful and great. ^^
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I always laugh at myself.
>> CorrectBecause life is so happy.
>> Because my life is so happy.
>> OR: I have a great life. Every times are new and cool.
>> Did you mean: Every time there is something new and cool.
>> OR: There is something new, different and coold every day. Good mind helps me to feel happy and laughed at myself.
>> Better: Having a good perspective in life makes me feel happy and I often laugh at myself.
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