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Could you check this sentences if it is correct? Are you ready for the travelling into the <심생전> and <춘향전>? The storylines of those two are basically similar throughout. one male and one female appear as main charaters in the stories. In <심생전>, 심생 is 20 years old good looking guy with a broad mind who was born in famous noble family, And the woman is 17 year old girl. During the royal procession, he saw her, and couldn’t stop falling in love at first sight instantly(fell in love at first sight). In the face of love, there is really nothing to be afraid, even the difference of social standing, climbing over the wall, or looking at her room on the sly were not a problem to him. About 20 days after he started a secret visiting, the woman realized his existence and refused him by locking the door. However, his persistent efforts changed her mind. And finally they got married.

Hello there! I enjoyed reading the story. (^^,) The plot is somewhat similar with some Korean dramas I\'ve watched. (kkk!) Anwyay, please go over the corrections and let\'s talk more about it tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Could you check this sentences if it is correct? >> Could you check these sentences if they are correct?   Are you ready for the travelling into the <심생전> and <춘향전>? >> Are you ready to travel to (name of places). >> Please tell me about this so I could check it. The storylines of those two are basically similar throughout. >> Correct! OR>> Their storylines are basically similar throughout. one male and one female appear as main charaters in the stories. >> One male and one female are the main charaters in the stories.In <심생전>, 심생 is 20 years old good looking guy with a broad mind who was born in famous noble family, And the woman is 17 year old girl. >> In <심생전>, 심생 is A 20 years old good looking guy with a broad mind who was born in famous noble family. The woman is 17 years old. During the royal procession, he saw her, and couldn’t stop falling in love at first sight instantly(fell in love at first sight). >> During the royal procession, he saw her, and he couldn’t stop himself from falling in love with her. It was love at first sight.   In the face of love, there is really nothing to be afraid, even the difference of social standing, climbing over the wall, or looking at her room on the sly were not a problem to him. >> In the face of love, there really is nothing to be afraid of, even the difference of social standing, climbing over a wall, or looking at her room on the sly were not a problem for him. About 20 days after he started a secret visiting, the woman realized his existence and refused him by locking the door. >> About 20 days after he started visiting secretly, the woman realized his existence and rejected him by locking the door. However, his persistent efforts changed her mind. >> However, his persistence changed her mind. And finally they got married. >> Correct!