Homework.

2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Nowdays, It's really hot summer and rainning. They make me tired in work place. kk You have to be careful s flu of summer. Anyway today's topic is "What's the most expensive thing you've ever bought?" When I was 20 years old, I bought a wallet of Guggi that almost was 500 $. I'm not rich, but I have greed for the wallet, so I'm run for that. And then, I always was hungry because of poverty in college. If I return that situations, I never bought the wallet. Currently, This wallet disappeared. I don't know where is my wallet...? kkk Let we talk more tomorrow. Bye Chelsea. Thank you

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ That was a very expensive wallet. Why did you buy it? Anyway, tell me more about that wallet tomorrow. Have a great day! ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Nowdays, It\'s really hot summer and rainning. >> Nowadays, it\'s summer. It\'s how and raining.They make me tired in work place. kk>> It makes me tires at work. KkkYou have to be careful s flu of summer. >> You have to be careful not catch flu in Summer.Anyway today\'s topic is \"What\'s the most expensive thing you\'ve ever bought?\">> CORRECT^^When I was 20 years old, I bought a wallet of Guggi that almost was 500 $. >> When I was 20 years old, I bought a guggi wallet and it was almost $500.I\'m not rich, but I have greed for the wallet, so I\'m run for that. >> I\'m not rich but I have greed for wallets, so I bought it. And then, I always was hungry because of poverty in college.>> And then, I was always hungry in college because of poverty.If I return that situations, I never bought the wallet. >> If I could turn back time, I would have nevery bought the wallet.Currently, This wallet disappeared. I don\'t know where is my wallet...?>> Recently, that wallet disappeared. I don\'t know where is my wallet.kkkLet we talk more tomorrow. >> Let\'s talk more tomorrow.Bye Chelsea. >> Bye Chelsea.Thank you >> CORRECT^^

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