homework

Hi Jehee!

Happy Wednesday!

Honestly, my condition now is bad.

I think I am getting weaker everyday.

However, I am always happy working.

Is the typhoon really strong?

Did you prepare anything for the typhoon?

Anyway, take care! ^^

By the way, I commend you for making a good composition.

You have a good way of expressing your ideas through writing.

However, the problem that I noticed the most is your mistakes regarding subject-verb agreement.

You need to work on this.

Anyway, as a whole, you did great!

Keep it up!

See you tomorrow! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Hi Paula!!!
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>> OR: Dear [Name],
How are you?
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We are being affected a little by Typhoon Racoon.

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The rain comes here.

>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It\'s raining here now.
Before leaving my destination, we have to check everything we need.
>> Before leaving for my destination, we have to check everything we need.

>> OR: Before leaving my house, we have to check everything we need.
It\'s clothes, daily supplies, tube for children, toys, and so on.
>> They are the clothes, daily supplies, tubes for children, toys and so on.
We will start early that day morning owing to a long distance until our destination.
>> We will start early in the morning owing to a long distance until out destination.
We uaually meet near our destination with my friends and go to buy foods with them at the supermarket.
>> We usually meet near our destination with my friends and go to buy foods with them at the supermarket.
We collect dues about 30 dallars every month.
>> We collect dues about 30 dollars every month.
When we usually play anywhere, this money is used.
>> When we play somewhere, this money is used.

>> OR: When we play somewhere, this money will be used.
When we leave a trip, we are very happy.
>> When we go on a trip, we are very happy.
However, when we come back at home, we are so hard.
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A trip need us necessarily for energy of our life.
>> It is necessary to us to have a trip for get energy for our lives. 
Nowdays, To go camping is popular in Korea.
>> Nowadays, camping is popular in Korea.
However, I don\'t like going camping because of hard things that pitch a tent, eat, and sleep in there.
>> However, I don\'t like going camping because of hard things such as pitching a tent, eating and sleeping there.
I prefer to take a rest in the resort, pension and hotel than in the tent.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you!!!
>> CORRECT!
See you tomorrow!!
>> CORRECT!
Bye!!

>> CORRECT!