homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
I am also proud of you!
It is because I know that you always give your best shot in everything you do.
Keep it up! I am sure that your parents are also proud of you.
It is important for us to be confident and positive.
I hope that you will win more a lot of awards in speaking contests. ^^
Have a great night. Thanks for doing your essay.
Teacher Nina
The proudest moment of my life is a time that I recieved the Science Minister award.
>> The proudest moment of my life was the time I received the Science Minister award.
I was proud of myself that I almost cry.
>> I was proud of myself that I almost cried.
Anyway,I\'m so proud of myself.
>> Correct
It was the proudest moment of my life.
>> Correct
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