Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!
Good morning to you!
Well, most Koreans would love to go to the beach or go abroad for their summer vacation.
I am happy that you have a plan this summer vacation.
Hoping that you would relax and enjoy your time in Japan.
Make the most out of it!
I am looking forward for your stories once you get back!
Thanks for your time!
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How do Koreans usually spend their summer vacation? How about you?
Korean make a plan for summer vacation.
>> Koreans usually make plans for their summer vacation.
We usually want to go to the beach or valley because it is cool.
>> correct!
I prefer to valley because there is shade under the trees.
>> I prefer to go to the valley because there is a shade under the trees.
My sister in law got married on this May so we will go to there for both housewarming and summer vacation on Ausgust.
>> My sister-in-law got married in May so we will go there for both housewarming and summer vacation in August.
By the way, I have a secret plan with my husband.
>> correct!
We will go to Japan before starting graduate school for four days.
>> We will go to Japan before the start of the graduate school for 4 days.
We went to the Osaka and Kyoto.
>> We went to Osaka and Tokyo before.
We will go to Tokyo at this time.
>> And we will go to Tokyo this time.
My husband is studying Japanese so he want to practice it in there.
>> My husband is studying Japanese so he wants to practice it there.
He will be guide for me because I can\'t speek Japanese.
>> He will guide me because I can\'t speak in Japanese.
We will visit Tokyo University, Shibuya, Shinjuku and so on.
>> correct!
We will have a Japan noodle and I already searched great restaurant.
>> We will have a Japanese noodle and I have already searched a great restaurant.
I heard Japan\'s bread is very delicious so I expect it.
>> I heard that Japanese bread is very delicious so I am expecting it.
We will start at Gimhae Airport on July 24th.
>> correct!
It will be really hot so I worry about that.
>> It will be really hot so I am worried about that.
I hope that we have a good weather at that time. Thank you.
>> I hope that we will have a good weather at that time. Thank you.
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