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2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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How do Koreans usually spend their summer vacation? How about you? Korean make a plan for summer vacation. We usually want to go to the beach or valley because it is cool. I prefer to valley because there is shade under the trees. My sister in law got married on this May so we will go to there for both housewarming and summer vacation on Ausgust. By the way, I have a secret plan with my husband. We will go to Japan before starting graduate school for four days. We went to the Osaka and Kyoto. We will go to Tokyo at this time. My husband is studying Japanese so he want to practice it in there. He will be guide for me because I can't speek Japanese. We will visit Tokyo University, Shibuya, Shinjuku and so on. We will have a Japan noodle and I already searched great restaurant. I heard Japan's bread is very delicious so I expect it. We will start at Gimhae Airport on July 24th. It will be really hot so I worry about that. I hope that we have a good weather at that time. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Good morning to you!

Well, most Koreans would love to go to the beach or go abroad for their summer vacation.
I am happy that you have a plan this summer vacation.

Hoping that you would relax and enjoy your time in Japan.

Make the most out of it!

I am looking forward for your stories once you get back!

Thanks for your time!

See you tomorrow!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


How do Koreans usually spend their summer vacation? How about you?
Korean make a plan for summer vacation.

>>  Koreans usually make plans for their summer vacation.

We usually want to go to the beach or valley because it is cool.

>>  correct!

I prefer to valley because there is shade under the trees.

>>  I prefer to go to the valley because there is a shade under the trees.

My sister in law got married on this May so we will go to there for both housewarming and summer vacation on Ausgust.

>>  My sister-in-law got married in May so we will go there for both housewarming and summer vacation in August.

By the way, I have a secret plan with my husband.

>>  correct!

We will go to Japan before starting graduate school for four days.

>>  We will go to Japan before the start of the graduate school for 4 days.

We went to the Osaka and Kyoto.

>>  We went to Osaka and Tokyo before.

We will go to Tokyo at this time.

>>  And we will go to Tokyo this time.

My husband is studying Japanese so he want to practice it in there.

>>  My husband is studying Japanese so he wants to practice it there.

He will be guide for me because I can\'t speek Japanese.

>>  He will guide me because I can\'t speak in Japanese.

We will visit Tokyo University, Shibuya, Shinjuku and so on.

>>  correct!

We will have a Japan noodle and I already searched great restaurant.

>>  We will have a Japanese noodle  and I have already searched a great restaurant.

I heard Japan\'s bread is very delicious so I expect it.

>>  I heard that Japanese bread is very delicious so I am expecting it.

We will start at Gimhae Airport on July 24th.

>>  correct!

It will be really hot so I worry about that.

>>  It will be really hot so I am worried about that.

I hope that we have a good weather at that time. Thank you.

>>  I hope that we will have a good weather at that time. Thank you.

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