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2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Composition making! What are the things that you like and dislike about living in your city/town? The most thing I like in my city is that Seoul has many subway stations and bus stations. It makes citizens move around conveniently in the city. In Seoul, there are more than 300 subway stations of 17 lines, and people can transfer from one line to another line easily. Also, The fare of the mass transportation is very cheap, so even the poor people can use it.

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Hi there [이름]!   Thanks for sharing these things to me. It\'s good that you have those kinds of transportation in your city. I hope we have subways here too. So that we won\'t have a hard time traveling from one place to another.   See you later in class!   ~Teacher Shanee   Composition making!What are the things that you like and dislike about living in your city/town?The most thing I like in my city is that Seoul has many subway stations and bus stations.>>> Correct!It makes citizens move around conveniently in the city. >>> These make citizens move around the city conveniently. In Seoul, there are more than 300 subway stations of 17 lines, and people can transfer from one line to another line easily. >>> Correct!Also, The fare of the mass transportation is very cheap, so even the poor people can use it. >>> Correct! (the fare)

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