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I disagree with the given sentence because it could invade elders' right and waste money and time in vain. I believe that most of car accidents are caused by traffic offenses not health problems like diminished eyesight or weak muscles. Thus, it is a non sense to worry about old people's capacities to drive in preventing car accidents. If we conduct a driving test to examine the elder's abilities for driving, it will cost time and money a lot to dealt with all old people. Most societies are already running local medical services to check their health and these are enough to identify health problems which can affect driving. Furthermore, some old people might feel shame to be assessed again because this policy looks like treating them as potential trouble makers or the disabled. There are other important is[이름]s to make better societies such as welfare for the aged and those should be given a priority.

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You established a very good point here. While it is true that aging comes with diminished vision, hearing, and reaction time, elderly drivers are more careful and are more likely to obey traffic rules than the younger ones. Thus, the is[이름] must be reviewed further. T. JanE ^^ I disagree with the given sentence because it could invade elders\' right and waste money and time in vain. >> Correct I believe that most of car accidents are caused by traffic offenses not health problems like diminished eyesight or weak muscles. >> Correct Thus, it is a non sense to worry about old people\'s capacities to drive in preventing car accidents. >> Thus, it is nonsense to worry about old people\'s capacity to drive without having car accidents.  If we conduct a driving test to examine the elder\'s abilities for driving, it will cost time and money a lot to dealt with all old people. >> If we conduct a driving test to examine the elders\' ability to drive, it will cost time and money to deal with many old people.  Most societies are already running local medical services to check their health and these are enough to identify health problems which can affect driving. >> Correct Furthermore, some old people might feel shame to be assessed again because this policy looks like treating them as potential trouble makers or the disabled. >> Furthermore, some old people might feel ashamed to be assessed again because this policy treats them as potential trouble makers.  There are other important is[이름]s to make better societies such as welfare for the aged and those should be given a priority. >> Correct