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Some people say that laughter is best medicine.
>>Some people say that laughter is the best medicine.
Because laughter provides fantastic physical and emotional release.
>>correct
OR: Because laughter provides fantastic physical and emotional relieve.
When i was a lot of people, Everyone is awkward because it is a place that see first time.
>>When I was with many people, everyone felt awkward because it was my first time to see them.
That time, someone started to laugh.
>>correct
And then, The air was alive with chatter and laughter, which became easier minute by minute.
>>correct
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