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2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Some people say that laughter is best medicine. Because laughter provides fantastic physical and emotional release. When i was a lot of people, Everyone is awkward because it is a place that see first time. That time, someone started to laugh. And then, The air was alive with chatter and laughter, which became easier minute by minute.

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Some people say that laughter is best medicine.

>>Some people say that laughter is the best medicine.

Because laughter provides fantastic physical and emotional release.

>>correct

OR: Because laughter provides fantastic physical and emotional relieve.
When i was a lot of people, Everyone is awkward because it is a place that see first time.

>>When I was with many people, everyone felt awkward because it was my first time to see them.
That time, someone started to laugh.

>>correct

And then, The air was alive with chatter and laughter, which became easier minute by minute.

>>correct

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