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2014-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.b 3.a 4.a 5.a 6.b 7.a 8.a 9.b We don't have the day to buy corals. I'm so sad. But I know that I mustn't buy corals in summer. But I waitedfor a long time. I really want to have corals.

강사 첨삭

Congratulations Tom!!!

You made a fantastic homework!

Your sentences were awesome and you got a perfect score.
Keep it up! Don\'t forget the usage of articles, proper spacing and punctuation marks.

I hope that you will continue improving your skills. Talk to you very soon.

I\'m sorry to hear that you can\'t buy corals. Just wait for the right time, I know you will be really happy.

Take Care Always!

Teacher Nina

 

1.b

>> Correct!
2.b

>> Correct!
3.a

>> Correct!
4.a

>> Correct!
5.a

>> Correct!
6.b

>> Correct!
7.a

>> Correct!
8.a

>> Correct!
9.b

>> Correct!

We don\'t have the day to buy corals.

>> Did you mean: We don\'t have time to buy corals.

>> OR: These days are not the best time to buy corals.
I\'m so sad.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I feel really sad.
But I know that I mustn\'t buy corals in summer.

>> Correct!
But I waitedfor a long time.

>> Correct! ( Proper spacing ^^)
I really want to have corals.

>> Correct!

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