homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Congratulations Tom!!!
You made a fantastic homework!
Your sentences were awesome and you got a perfect score.
Keep it up! Don\'t forget the usage of articles, proper spacing and punctuation marks.
I hope that you will continue improving your skills. Talk to you very soon.
I\'m sorry to hear that you can\'t buy corals. Just wait for the right time, I know you will be really happy.
Take Care Always!
Teacher Nina
1.b
>> Correct!
2.b
>> Correct!
3.a
>> Correct!
4.a
>> Correct!
5.a
>> Correct!
6.b
>> Correct!
7.a
>> Correct!
8.a
>> Correct!
9.b
>> Correct!
We don\'t have the day to buy corals.
>> Did you mean: We don\'t have time to buy corals.
>> OR: These days are not the best time to buy corals.
I\'m so sad.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I feel really sad.
But I know that I mustn\'t buy corals in summer.
>> Correct!
But I waitedfor a long time.
>> Correct! ( Proper spacing ^^)
I really want to have corals.
>> Correct!
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