homework

Hi Jehee!

Happy Thursday!

I feel better now.

I just have a headache, but it is not really disturbing. Kkk~~~ ^^

Thanks for asking about my condition! ^^,

How about you?

How do you feel today?

I hope you are absolutely fine and healthy.

By the way, a homework is given to challenge students.

A homework cannot be a challenge if there is no hardship in doing it.

Therefore, your feeling about your homework is just normal.

What matters is on how you do it.

Do you do it happily or with a lot of doubts?

You have the answer. ^^

Anyway, please see the corrections and suggestions below to lesson your mistakes the next time you do your homework!

As a whole, you did great in your composition.

Just keep on writing and improving!

See you later! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Hi Paula!!
>> CORRECT!
How are you?
>> CORRECT!
When people have a travel to other countries, their purpose differ from individual to individual.
>> When people travel to other countries, their purposes differ from individual to individual.
There are many reason to study, to travel, to work and so on.
>> There are many reasons such as studying, traveling, working and so on.
If it is a purpose to travel, people will be interested in sightseeing of the country.
>> If it is a purpose to travel, people will be interested in sightseeing.

>> OR: If it is a purpose to travel, people will be interested at visiting famous tourist spots of the country where they want to go.
I also.
>> CORRECT

>> OR: Me too.

>> OR: I have the same reason.
Today\'s homework is very difficult.
>> CORRECT!
The country differs from my country in many things.
>> Other countries differ from my country in many things.

>> OR: Another country differ from my country in many things.
When we are faced with such things first, we feel surprisingly about them.
>> When we are faced with such things at the first time, we feel surprised by them.

>> OR: When we are faced with such things at the first time, we feel surprisingly amazed by them.
It is a good experience to eat the country\'s foods, experience the country\'s culture and look the country\'s life.
>> Eating traditional food and learning the culture and lifestyle of people of other countries is a good experience.

>> OR: It is a good experience to eat traditional food and learn the culture and lifestyle of the people of other countries. 
I want to have a trip to many other countries but, It isn\'t easy practically.
>> I want to have a trip to many other countries, but it isn\'t easy practically.

>> BETTER: I want to have a trip to many other countries, but it isn\'t practically easy.
While I work at this company, I had ever gone abroad to work 3 times.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: While I work at this company, I had business trips abroad 3 times.
The places are Ssalalah of Oman, Djibouti, Abu Dhabi.
>> The places are Ssalalah of Oman, Djibouti and Abu Dhabi.
There were warships of the Korea there to scour the sea of pirates.
>> There were warships made in Korea there to scour the sea of pirates.

>> OR: There were warships made in Korea there to scour pirates in the sea.
Our equipment that equipped in the warship was broken at that time so, I had to go there to fix it.
>> Our warship equipment was broken at that time, so I had to go there to fix it.
The limit is reached.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: That\'s all for now!
Bye!

>> CORRECT!