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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition making!
Do you think alternative medicines work better than modern drugs? Why or why not?
In my opinion, both of them is necessary to heal the sick people. some of them think that alternative medicine works better to them, so it causes the placebo effect. For the result of it, they are healed very quickly. The other case is same, too. So, we need to use alternative medicines and modern drugs in harmony.
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Happy Friday [이름]!
Thanks for your opinion. I really appreciate it!
I agree with your opinion. I believe that these two are essential. Modern medicine is widely used nowadays, but the medical world is still open to alternative medicines. The results may vary though. Some have been proven to work and some were not. So it depends on us what kind of medicine we\'re going to use.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition making!Do you think alternative medicines work better than modern drugs? Why or why not?In my opinion, both of them is necessary to heal the sick people.
>>> In my opinion, both of them are necessary to heal sick people.
some of them think that alternative medicine works better to them, so it causes the placebo effect.
>>> Correct! (Some)
For the result of it, they are healed very quickly.
>>> Correct!
OR:
>>> As a result of it, they are healed very quickly.
The other case is same, too.
>>> Correct!
OR:
>>> The other case is also the same.
So, we need to use alternative medicines and modern drugs in harmony.
>>> Correct!
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