homework :)
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Fill in the blanks the right tense of verb from the parenthesis.
John was born on a little farm back East. He was happy even though he _lived_ (live)a harsh life cultivating his field. One day he _woke up_ (wake up) by a heavy storm. When the storm _let up_ (let up) he _saw_ (see) that his plantation _was destroyed_ (destroy). He _felt_ (feel) despondent and _decided_ (decide) that he could no longer live on the farm. He _had__ (have) to move somewhere else. He _left_ (leave) the farm and _came_ (come)to the city. The hustle and bustle of the city _frightened_ (frighten) John a lot, but he _didn't want_ (want/neg.)to go back to his farm. John's life in the city was very difficult. The only person he _could count on_ (can count on) was Tom, a distant relative, who was a very patient and understanding person and who _tried_ (try) to help John to get used to _living_ (live) in the city.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa!
I am happy to have your homework and yes good job on it. Not that bad for a 13 out of 15. The two mistakes you got were inthe same cases. You are good with the tense of verb spicifically the past tense. However we got the incorrect with the sentences in the passive voice.
ACTIVE VOICE - the subject is doing the action.
PASSIVE VOICE - the action is done to the subject.
Let us try some example:
She kicked the ball. (She which is the subject did the action kick to the ball)
The ball was kicked by her. ( The ball which is the subject received the action kick done by her)
Let us see the sentence inyour homework.
One day he was woken up by the heavy storm. (PASSIVE VOICE)
Let us do the active voice.
The heavy storm woke him up.
Here is a simple rule for passive voice:
ACTIVE VOICE PASSIVE VOICE
He sings a song. A song is sung by him.
He sang a song. A song was sung by him.
The verb in the passive voice is always in the past participle form but still follows the the proper tense of verb.
Try to check on this and if there would be any other questions, please ask me ^.^
Teacher Mabel
John was born on a little farm back East. He was happy even though he lived >> CORRECT (live) a harsh life cultivating his field. One day he woke up >> was woken up (wake up) by a heavy storm. When the storm let up >>CORRECT (let up) he saw >> CORRECT (see) that his plantation was destroyed >>had been destroyed (destroy). He felt >> CORRECT (feel) despondent and decided >> CORRECT (decide) that he could no longer live on the farm. He had >> CORRECT (have) to move somewhere else. He left >>CORRECT (leave) the farm and came >> CORRECT (come)to the city. The hustle and bustle of the city frightened >> CORRECT (frighten) John a lot, but he didn\'t want >> CORRECT (want/neg.) to go back to his farm. John\'s life in the city was very difficult. The only person he could count on >> CORRECT (can count on) was Tom, a distant relative, who was a very patient and understanding person and who tried >> CORRECT(try) to help John to get used to living >> CORRECT (live) in the city.
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