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Good morning again Ms. [Name]!
Well, I agree that knowing English is a part of a college degree.
But nowadays, knowing English is still a big part in achieving a college degree.
High school students would study very hard to achieve a high score in English to be able to go to good universities or colleges.
Anyway, maybe it just depends on the perception of any person.
See you again tomorrow!
Have a great day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Knowing English well is equivalent to a college degree.
I don\'t think so. I disagree wiht this opinion.
>> correct! (with)
This is because I think that Knowing English is just a part of College degree.
>> This is because I think that knowing English is just a part of a college degree.
We can choose English class as cultural studies in the university.
>> correct!
Although we don\'t know Enlgish well, we can get a good job.
>> correct!
Actually, unless we have a college degree, we can get a great job, too.
>> correct!
It is different.
>> correct!
I know that major company request a high English score but this is a part of evaluation standard.
>> I know that major companies request a high English score but this is a part of the evaluation standard.
These day, there are a lot of admission process.
>> These day, there are a lot of admission processes.
Some universities allow to enter there students who are study abroad.
>> Some universities allow students who are studying abroad to enter their university.
This is because they know English well.
>> correct!
Finally, we say it is different.
>> correct!
But we know that English is used in the real life.
>> But we know that English is being used in real life.
Bye the way, college degree is not useful sometime.
>> By the way, college degree is not useful sometimes.
I don\'t know which is right. Thank you.
>> correct!
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