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2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Knowing English well is equivalent to a college degree. I don't think so. I disagree wiht this opinion. This is because I think that Knowing English is just a part of College degree. We can choose English class as cultural studies in the university. Although we don't know Enlgish well, we can get a good job. Actually, unless we have a college degree, we can get a great job, too. It is different. I know that major company request a high English score but this is a part of evaluation standard. These day, there are a lot of admission process. Some universities allow to enter there students who are study abroad. This is because they know English well. Finally, we say it is different. But we know that English is used in the real life. Bye the way, college degree is not useful sometime. I don't know which is right. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Ms. [Name]!

Well, I agree that knowing English is a part of a college degree.

But nowadays, knowing English is still a big part in achieving a college degree.
High school students would study very hard to achieve a high score in English to be able to go to good universities or colleges.

Anyway, maybe it just depends on the perception of any person.

See you again tomorrow!

Have a great day!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Knowing English well is equivalent to a college degree.
 I don\'t think so. I disagree wiht this opinion.

>>  correct! (with)

This is because I think that Knowing English is just a part of College degree.

>>  This is because I think that knowing English is just a part of a college degree.

We can choose English class as cultural studies in the university.

>>  correct!

Although we don\'t know Enlgish well, we can get a good job.

>>  correct!

Actually, unless we have a college degree, we can get a great job, too.

>>  correct!

 It is different.

>>  correct!

I know that major company request a high English score but this is a part of evaluation standard.

>>  I know that major companies request  a high English score but this is a part of the evaluation standard.

These day, there are a lot of admission process.

>>  These day, there are a lot of admission processes.

Some universities allow to enter there students who are study abroad.

>>  Some universities allow students who are studying abroad to enter their university.

This is because they know English well.

>>  correct!

Finally, we say it is different.

>>  correct!

But we know that English is used in the real life.

>>  But we know that English is being used in real life.

Bye the way, college degree is not useful sometime.

>>  By the way, college degree is not useful sometimes.

I don\'t know which is right. Thank you.

>>  correct!

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