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2014-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, I enjoy life. Before I told you.My life is happy. I have a happy life, so I am not give up something. So,I think enjoying life makes me optimistic.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom ^-^ A wonderful Friday to you and to your family. ^-^ I AM SO GRATEFUL THAT YOU EXTENDED YOUR CLASS AGAIN WITH ME. Thank you very much. ^^ You always make it to a point to do your homework everyday. Let us improve your skills more. I am glad that you are always happy. Always smile and be positive. ^^ Talk to you very soon. Teacher Nina   Yes, I enjoy life. >> CORRECT!Before I told you.My life is happy. >> I told you before that I live a happy life. I have a happy life, so I am not give up something. >> I have a happy life, so I will not give up. >> OR: I am happy with my life, so I won\'t give up because of difficulties.So,I think enjoying life makes me optimistic. >> CORRECT!

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