homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I enjoy life.
Before I told you.My life is happy.
I have a happy life, so I am not give up something.
So,I think enjoying life makes me optimistic.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom ^-^
A wonderful Friday to you and to your family. ^-^
I AM SO GRATEFUL THAT YOU EXTENDED YOUR CLASS AGAIN WITH ME.
Thank you very much. ^^ You always make it to a point to do your homework everyday.
Let us improve your skills more. I am glad that you are always happy.
Always smile and be positive. ^^ Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
Yes, I enjoy life.
>> CORRECT!Before I told you.My life is happy.
>> I told you before that I live a happy life. I have a happy life, so I am not give up something.
>> I have a happy life, so I will not give up.
>> OR: I am happy with my life, so I won\'t give up because of difficulties.So,I think enjoying life makes me optimistic.
>> CORRECT!
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