Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
HI Chelsea.
Today's topic is "What is an example of situation that would make you feel very nervous?"
I think all test day that i have to attend make me nervous.
Sometime I was too nervous to fail, although I prepare the test a lot.
If I come back this time, I will do breath smoothly and I will do it with peaceful.
today's essay option is "ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN [7] SENTENCES", but I don't think more this topic ;;
Anyway let's talk more tomorrow.
Bye. Thank you Chlesea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
See you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
HI Chelsea.>> Hi Chelsea!Today\'s topic is \"What is an example of situation that would make you feel very nervous?\">> CORRECT^^I think all test day that i have to attend make me nervous.>> I think all kinds of tests makes me nervous.Sometime I was too nervous to fail, although I prepare the test a lot.>> Sometimes, I am too nervou to fail, although I prepare a lot for the test.If I come back this time, I will do breath smoothly and I will do it with peaceful.>> If I can go back to that time, I would breathe smoothly and I will fo it peacefully.today\'s essay option is \"ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN [7] SENTENCES\", but I don\'t think more this topic ;;>> Today\'s essay requirement is to answer in nnot more than 7 sentences but I cannot think more about this topic.Anyway let\'s talk more tomorrow.>> Anyway, let\'s talk more tomorrow.Bye. Thank you Chlesea.
>> CORRECT^^
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