Homework.

2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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HI Chelsea. Today's topic is "What is an example of situation that would make you feel very nervous?" I think all test day that i have to attend make me nervous. Sometime I was too nervous to fail, although I prepare the test a lot. If I come back this time, I will do breath smoothly and I will do it with peaceful. today's essay option is "ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN [7] SENTENCES", but I don't think more this topic ;; Anyway let's talk more tomorrow. Bye. Thank you Chlesea.

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Hi there Luke^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. See you tomorrow^^ ~T.Chelsea HI Chelsea.>> Hi Chelsea!Today\'s topic is \"What is an example of situation that would make you feel very nervous?\">> CORRECT^^I think all test day that i have to attend make me nervous.>> I think all kinds of tests makes me nervous.Sometime I was too nervous to fail, although I prepare the test a lot.>> Sometimes, I am too nervou to fail, although I prepare a lot for the test.If I come back this time, I will do breath smoothly and I will do it with peaceful.>> If I can go back to that time, I would breathe smoothly and I will fo it peacefully.today\'s essay option is \"ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN [7] SENTENCES\", but I don\'t think more this topic ;;>> Today\'s essay requirement is to answer in nnot more than 7 sentences but I cannot think more about this topic.Anyway let\'s talk more tomorrow.>> Anyway, let\'s talk more tomorrow.Bye. Thank you Chlesea. >> CORRECT^^

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