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2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Do attractive people have advantages others don't? when I read the question, I have two of meanings. First, do attractive people have advantages if other people don't have. Second, do attractive people have advantages it they don't anything. I think first is more right. I feel difficult when I read sentences. Maybe I lack English grammer. Help me:) Yes, they do. Attractive people have many advatages. At first, their first impression is great so it is a quit favorable positon in the interview or blind date. Of course, it is different whether is appearance charm or not. Although someone don't have attraction in term of looks, they can have a good personality. Finally, they can gain recognition. They have a lot of friends so they can get a help from them. Therefore, they can work easily. I think there are various attractions such as healthy body, excercising ability and so on. We have to improve our strong part. They can live sucessfully and happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Ms. [Name]!

Well, the questions means that do attractive/beautiful/handsome people have more advantages than those people who are not attractive, beautiful or handsome.

So you first question is quite near to the question.

And if it is difficult for you to understand the question, what I suggest is that you just read it again and again and make some of your imagination.

Then viola! It could work.
Anyway, you gave a comprehensive answer so do not worry about it.
See you tomorrow!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Do attractive people have advantages others don\'t?


 when I read the question, I have two of meanings.

>>  correct!

First, do attractive people have advantages if other people don\'t have.

>>  correct!

Second, do attractive people have advantages it they don\'t anything.

>>  Second, do attractive people have advantages it they don\'t do anything/

I think first is more right.

>>  I think that the first question is more correct.

I feel difficult when I read sentences.

>>  correct!

Maybe I lack English grammer. Help me:)
>>  Maybe, I lack English grammar skills. Help me.
Yes, they do.

>>  correct!

Attractive people have many advatages.

>>  correct! (advantages)

At first, their first impression is great so it is a quit favorable positon in the interview or blind date.

>> At first, their first impression is great so it is quite a favorable positon during an interview or blind date. 

Of course, it is different whether is appearance charm or not.

>>  Of course, it is different whether he/she has a charm or not.

Although someone don\'t have attraction in term of looks, they can have a good personality.

>>  Although someone isn\'t  in term of looks, they can have a good personality.

 Finally, they can gain recognition.

>>  correct!

They have a lot of friends so they can get a help from them.

>>  They have a lot of friends so they can get help from them.

Therefore, they can work easily.

>>  correct!

I think there are various attractions such as healthy body, excercising ability and so on.

>>  correct!

We have to improve our strong part.

>>  We have to improve our strong points.

They can live sucessfully and happy.

>>  They can live successfully and happily.

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