Homework (47)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How do you save energy in your house.
If nobody is in room, than I turn off the light of that room.
2. When do you usally consume much energy?
If I forgot unplugging and TV and computer are both turned on, then I consume much energy.
3. What are the appliances that you always use?
I always use my smart phone and computer.
강사 첨삭
Hi there sweet [이름]! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework!
Until the next one!
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~Teacher Sheila
If nobody is in room, than I turn off the light of that room.
>>If nobody is in the room then I turn off the light.
If I forgot unplugging and TV and computer are both turned on, then I consume much energy.
>>If I forgot to unplug the TV and the computer then I consume much energy.
OR>>If I use the TV and the computer then I would consume much energy.
I always use my smart phone and computer.
>>CORRECT
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