homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa!
Thank you for sending in your composition and I think you really had a good weekend. It is really so nice to think and talk about the past days and I am pretty sure you had lots of fun memories. High school is really the most fun and challenging life for me. You had lots of fun memories, tried lots of new things and also struggled about studies and relationship.
I hope we can have more interesting time together in class. I am looking forward to talk with you soon.
Teacher Mabel
I met my high school friend on Sunday.
>>CORRECT
OR
>> I met my high school friend last Sunday.
We went shopping and bought same dress.
>> We went shopping and bought the same dress.
We ate pasta, steak and fruit ice cream.
>>CORRECT
It was very delicious.
>> CORRECT
We also went cafe and thought high school days.3
>> We also went to a cafe and reminisce our high school days.
We talked about our friends, teachers and classes.
>> CORRECT
I still miss that days and It was very good day!
>> I still miss those days and we really had a good day!
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