homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: If you could be an animal, what animal would you choose to be and why?
It's difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is a best selection. Anyway except human, um....I really don't want to be a other animal. Life of Other animals are very monotonous and repetitive. They go around to find foods, fight for rank and mate in a breeding season. It seems all that matters to them are survival and propagation. However, human beings have a their one each dreams and perspective. We can also have a ability to predict about future and love deeply. Only humans go on a journey to find hisself. I think hope is a one of the biggest characteristic of human being and hope comes from a firm sense of self.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
It really is difficult to choose but I\'m still grateful that you explained why.
Anyway, I just hope that I got your ideasa correctly.
See you! Have a good day!
~T. Jessie~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: If you could be an animal, what animal would you choose to be and why?\\It\'s difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is a best selection.
>> It\'s difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is the best choice.
Anyway except human, um....I really don\'t want to be a other animal.
>> Anyway except human, um....I really don\'t want to be an animal.
Life of Other animals are very monotonous and repetitive.
>> The life of other animals are very monotonous and repetitive.
They go around to find foods, fight for rank and mate in a breeding season.
>> They go around to find foods, they fight for rank and mate in breeding season.
It seems all that matters to them are survival and propagation.
>> It seems that all that matters to them are survival and propagation.
However, human beings have a their one each dreams and perspective.
>> However, human beings have their own dreams and perspective.
We can also have a ability to predict about future and love deeply.
>> We can also have the ability to predict the future and to love deeply.
Only humans go on a journey to find hisself.
>> Only humans can go on a journey to find himself.
I think hope is a one of the biggest characteristic of human being and hope comes from a firm sense of self.
>> I think hope is one of the most important characteristic of human beings and hope comes from a firm sense of self.
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