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2014-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: If you could be an animal, what animal would you choose to be and why? It's difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is a best selection. Anyway except human, um....I really don't want to be a other animal. Life of Other animals are very monotonous and repetitive. They go around to find foods, fight for rank and mate in a breeding season. It seems all that matters to them are survival and propagation. However, human beings have a their one each dreams and perspective. We can also have a ability to predict about future and love deeply. Only humans go on a journey to find hisself. I think hope is a one of the biggest characteristic of human being and hope comes from a firm sense of self.

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Hello there! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It really is difficult to choose but I\'m still grateful that you explained why. Anyway, I just hope that I got your ideasa correctly. See you! Have  a good day! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: If you could be an animal, what animal would you choose to be and why?\\It\'s difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is a best selection. >> It\'s difficult to choose....in fact I think human being is the best choice. Anyway except human, um....I really don\'t want to be a other animal. >> Anyway except human, um....I really don\'t want to be an animal. Life of Other animals are very monotonous and repetitive. >> The life of other animals are very monotonous and repetitive. They go around to find foods, fight for rank and mate in a breeding season. >> They go around to find foods, they fight for rank and mate in breeding season. It seems all that matters to them are survival and propagation. >> It seems that all that matters to them are survival and propagation. However, human beings have a their one each dreams and perspective. >> However, human beings have their own dreams and perspective. We can also have a ability to predict about future and love deeply. >> We can also have the ability to predict the future and to love deeply. Only humans go on a journey to find hisself. >> Only humans can go on a journey to find himself. I think hope is a one of the biggest characteristic of human being and hope comes from a firm sense of self. >>  I think hope is one of the most important characteristic of human beings and hope comes from a firm sense of self.

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