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Almost people uses electric socket and power strip.
>>Almost all people use electric socket and power strip/outlet.
The power stirip usually looks like shape of a load.
>>The power strip usually looks like the shape of a load.
If this is seperated from each other, the rotation of each other one socket is made possible.
>>If this is separated from each other, the rotation of each socket maybe made possible.
And then, we can conveniently use it.
>>correct
Can you understand my thoughts?
>>correct
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