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2014-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Almost people uses electric socket and power strip. The power stirip usually looks like shape of a load. If this is seperated from each other, the rotation of each other one socket is made possible. And then, we can conveniently use it. Can you understand my thoughts?

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Almost people uses electric socket and power strip. 

>>Almost all people use electric socket and power strip/outlet.
The power stirip usually looks like shape of a load.

>>The power strip usually looks like the shape of a load.
If this is seperated from each other, the rotation of each other one socket is made possible.

>>If this is separated from each other, the rotation of each socket maybe made possible.
And then, we can conveniently use it.
>>correct
Can you understand my thoughts?

>>correct

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