homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Wow! That was one kind of an experience! You really didn\'t tell anyone about what happened to your finger? I am glad that it\'s no longer painful...
But you still have to consult your doctor regarding this my dear...Please...
And thank you for a job well done on your homework...
Keep up the good work!
I will call you again later my dear.
Take care and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Everyone has a privacy.
>>Everyone needs a privacy.
Also I a have privacy.
>>I also need my privacy.
For example, when I was a kid, my little finger was fractured.
>>correct
When learning hapkido, I did falling and then I was wrong landing.
>>When learning hapkido, I fell down and landed untimely.
That is the reason that my privacy was appreared.
>>That was when I realized I needed my privacy.
My little finger is still in a state of fracture.
>>correct
OR: I still have my fractured finger.
But now i have no pain.
>>But it\'s no longer painful.
*hapkido : it is a martial art of Korean origin.
>>correct
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