homework.

2014-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Everyone has a privacy. Also I a have privacy. For example, when I was a kid, my little finger was fractured. When learning hapkido, I did falling and then I was wrong landing. That is the reason that my privacy was appreared. My little finger is still in a state of fracture. But now i have no pain. *hapkido : it is a martial art of Korean origin.

강사 첨삭

Wow! That was one kind of an experience! You really didn\'t tell anyone about what happened to your finger? I am glad that it\'s no longer painful...

But you still have to consult your doctor regarding this my dear...Please...

And thank you for a job well done on your homework...
Keep up the good work!
I will call you again later my dear.

Take care and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Everyone has a privacy. 

>>Everyone needs a privacy.
 Also I a have privacy. 

>>I also need my privacy.
 For example, when I was a kid, my little finger was fractured. 

>>correct
 When learning hapkido, I did falling and then I was wrong landing. 

>>When learning hapkido, I fell down and landed untimely.
 That is the reason that my privacy was appreared.

>>That was when I realized I needed my privacy.
 My little finger is still in a state of fracture.

>>correct

OR: I still have my fractured finger.
 But now i have no pain.
>>But it\'s no longer painful.
 *hapkido : it is a martial art of Korean origin.

>>correct

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