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2014-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition making! How would your life be different without the Internet? I can't imagine my life without the Internet. I really depend on it in everyday life. I use the Internet to find some information, learn languages and communicate with others. Nevertheless, sometimes I dream about my life without the Internet. It seems that I am so subordinate to it that I can't drop it off from my hands. Furthermore, It often gives me a series of headaches.

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Hello there [이름]!   Internet is called the gigantic library. Thus, it provides a lot of information needed. You can also use it as a message board and publishing medium. In other words, it is a means of communication. Internet is now a part of our everyday living that it became so powerful. It can be beneficial or destructive depending on how we use it. Therefore, we need to be very careful.   Thank you so much [이름] for sharing your thoughts about the topic.   See you later in class!   ~Teacher Shanee   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition making!How would your life be different without the Internet?I can\'t imagine my life without the Internet. >>> Correct! I really depend on it in everyday life. >>> Correct! I use the Internet to find some information, learn languages and communicate with others. >>> Correct! Nevertheless, sometimes I dream about my life without the Internet. >>> Correct! It seems that I am so subordinate to it that I can\'t drop it off from my hands. >>> It seems that I am so dependent to it that I can\'t drop it off my hands. >>> OR: It seems that I am so dependent to it that using it can\'t be removed from my system. Furthermore, It often gives me a series of headaches. >>> Correct! (it)

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