homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Tom!
I appreciate that you did your homework today.
I think that was your answer because you are still you and you told me that you enjoy your life.
That\'s great to hear! It is good that you were able to express your thoughts in writing.
Can\'t wait to hear your ideas in class. Try to make longer sentences, okay? Take Care!
If you do have any suggestions, feel free to tell it in class.
Teacher Nina
I haven\'t thought about it yet.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I haven\'t thought about controlling the time.
So, I don\'t know.
>> Correct!
>> Better: I don\'t have any idea.
But I don\'t want to stop and restart time.
>> But I don\'t want to stop and restart the time.
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