homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Write something about your student.
My student's name is Shin ji-hye. She is 8 years old, first grade of elementary school.
She is so cute,lovely and active but sometimes made me embarrassed.
She likes drawing pictures and making something with colored paper but doesn’t like studying math and taking dictation.
She likes meat and fish.
She lives with grandfather, father, mother and younger sister.
Her father is Korean and her grandfather and mother is Vietnamese.
So she knows and understands various cultures a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa!
Thak you so much for your time dropping your composition. Yes kids are really adorable but sometimes make you angry when they are hyperactive. As I have said in our class I really think you are a sociable person and would love to reach out to other people specially to kids. I know one day you will be a great person.
I always enjoy knowing your activities and it is really a very interesting things you do out there. ^.^ Have a great day always.
Teacher Mabel
My student\'s name is Shin ji-hye.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Her name is Shin Ji-hye
She is 8 years old, first grade of elementary school.
>> She is 8 years old and a first grade elementary student.She is so cute,lovely and active but sometimes made me embarrassed.
>> She is so cute, lovely and active but sometimes embarras me.She likes drawing pictures and making something with colored paper but doesn’t like studying math and taking dictation.
>> She like drawing pictures and making paper arts but doesn\'t like studying math and dictation.She likes meat and fish.
>>CORRECTShe lives with grandfather, father, mother and younger sister.
>> She lives with her grandfather, father, mother and younger sister.Her father is Korean and her grandfather and mother is Vietnamese.
>> Her father is a Korean and her grandfather and mother are Vietnamese.So she knows and understands various cultures a lot.
>> So she knows and understands a lot of cultures.
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