homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa dear!
I am really surprised that there is still a young heart like you who have a big heart for other people. I do agree to you that it is self satisfaction and self worth is what you find when you help other people. It feels so warm when you lighten the burden and lessen the sadness of other people. From our conversations every night I know that you are a very good young lady out there. Keep making good deeds to other people because in that way you are also doing good for your self.
Everything takes time and perfection takes passion. Keep on using the language as I always believe will make you own it. The world is big yet small for people to connect. I will always keep the stuffs we had in class and I will always cherish your good heart you shared to me. I know one day you will be connecting with more people through your skills with the language.
^.^ Teacher Mabel
Helping other people has a lot of types.
>>We can help other people in many ways.
Not only doing houswork for mom but also helping older people or disabled person and teaching kids what I know are helping other people.
>>Not only doing housework for mom can I help other people but also assisting older people and disabled person and teaching kids.
When I am helping other people, I feel a sense of satisfaction.
>>CORRECT
OR
>> When I am helping other people, I feel a sense of self satisfaction.
That I can give what I know and do makes me feel gratitude.
>>Sharing what I know and doing what I can do makes me feel self gratitude.
I also think I will keep helping people in a lot of ways.
>> I also think that I will keep on helping other people in a lot of ways.
To teacher Mabel.
>> ^.^
Teacher, I still have a lot of things I don\'t know about English.
>> Teacher, I still have a lot of things to know about English.
or
>> Teacher, there are still a lotof things I do not know about English.
And it often takes much time for me to think what I say.
>> And oftent times it takes me much of time to think what I want to say.
But you always understand me and treat me kindly.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> But you are always understanding and kind.
So I am always thankful to you. ^-^
>>^.^ CORRECT
See you tonight~!!
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Talk to you tonight!
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