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2014-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mabel

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY! ESSAY: What are the common things you do during summer? During summer, I have tutorial classes twice a week, Tuesday and Friday. But from next week or the week after next, I will change days of week to Tuesday and Thursday. Other things that I do during summer is to meet my friends. During the semester, I can't often meet my high school friends and middle school friends. So I meet them on summer vacation. I also watch TV drama that went off the air. When I watch drama eating snack, I feel relaxed.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lisa! As I have always told you in class you are a good person and keep doing great things. I have learned a lot of things from you and I am grateful meeting you. Keep up the good thing and keep on using the language. I will always hope best days to come your way. Goodbye ^.^ Teacher Mabel ^.^ During summer, I have tutorial classes twice a week, Tuesday and Friday. >> During summer, I have tutorial classes twice a week, Tuesdays and Fridays.But from next week or the week after next, I will change days of week to Tuesday and Thursday. >>However, from next week or maybe the week after next, I will change my schedule to Tuesdays and Thursdays.Other things that I do during summer is to meet my friends.. >> Other things I do during summer is having time to meet my friends.During the semester, I can\'t often meet my high school friends and middle school friends. >> CORRECT OR >> During the semester, I can\'t often meet my high school and middle school friends. So I meet them on summer vacation. >> CORRECTI also watch TV drama that went off the air. >> I also watch TV dramas that I haven\'t watch on the regular times.When I watch drama eating snack, I feel relaxed. >> When I watch drama I eat snack and I feel relaxed.

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