homework.

2014-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

It's appearance. Actually it is maybe not be the answer. But, someone may say it is the answer. Because what looks good tastes good. Of course, Matter of how to interpret the appearance is important. Anyway, when attractive appearance is to convince others that it is true that a large force. This means that someone person has all the positive characteristics of the person to evaluate the impact that will be crucial.

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Hi there once again my dear [이름], thank you for allotting time in doing your homework. Great job! You were able to express your opinion about the said topic and you were even able to give some examples...

I hope you will keep up the good work my dear and I know, in no time, you will become what you really want.. Because I believe in you, I believe that you can do anything and everything you want. You just need to believe in yourself my dear...

Talk to you again later and please take care always...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

It\'s appearance.

>>correct
 Actually it is maybe not be the answer.

>>It may not be the answer actually.
 But, someone may say it is the answer.

>>correct
 Because what looks good tastes good.

>>correct
 Of course, Matter of how to interpret the appearance is important. 

>>Of course, the matter on how you would interpret the appearance is important.
 Anyway, when attractive appearance is to convince others that it is true that a large force. 

>>Anyway, being attractive may convince others that this may also be important.
 This means that someone person has all the positive characteristics of the person to evaluate the impact that will be crucial.

>>Which means, someone who has all the positive characteristics may also be evaluated and is also crucial.

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