homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름], thank you once again for sending in your composition today.
I am so impressed with the way you expressed your opinions. Great job!
I hope you will keep up the good work my dear...
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again later..
take care and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Today question is just bullshit in Korea.
>>Today\'s question is just a crap in Korea.
The Republic of Korea is a democratic nation.
>>correct
Not communism.
>>correct
Freedom and equality are the basic principles of democracy.
>>correct
If the government restrict freedom of speech, many people will attack the government.
>>If the government would restrict the freedom of speech, many people will attack the government.
For example, democracy is two wolves and a lamb voting on what to have for lunch.
>>For example, democracy would signify the wolves and a lamb choosing for their lunch.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.