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2014-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Today question is just bullshit in Korea. The Republic of Korea is a democratic nation. Not communism. Freedom and equality are the basic principles of democracy. If the government restrict freedom of speech, many people will attack the government. For example, democracy is two wolves and a lamb voting on what to have for lunch.

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Today question is just bullshit in Korea.

>>Today\'s question is just a crap in Korea.
 The Republic of Korea is a democratic nation.

>>correct

Not communism.

>>correct
 Freedom and equality are the basic principles of democracy. 

>>correct
 If the government restrict freedom of speech, many people will attack the government. 

>>If the government would restrict the freedom of speech, many people will attack the government.
 For example, democracy is two wolves and a lamb voting on what to have for lunch.

>>For example, democracy would signify the wolves and a lamb choosing for their lunch.

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