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hunger In recent Korea, foods overflow and most Korean don't suffer from hunger. However homelesses, poor seniors who live alone and children from struggling families still suffer from hunger. I think starving children is a most serious problem. Because the lack of nutritions affects children's growth. 172,000 students can't pay their lunch money in korea. Goverment discussed about the free-lunch policy in school, but it still arguable. The advocates argue that goverment should provide free-lunch to all of students. But opponents suggest the free lunch for only selected students. Goverment and many NGO provide free meal and free box lunch services for the less well off. Goverment welfare centers hire social workers to reserch and take care of them. Recnetly, the number of jobless 20s increase. The competition to get a job is intense, so 20s spent a lots of time and money to prepare lisence or test. (get a temporary job) They have restrict incomes, so they absent their meals.

Hello there! I hope I got your ideas correctly. Here are the corrections I made. Please go over it. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ hunger >> HungerIn recent Korea, foods overflow and most Korean don\'t suffer from hunger. >> Nowadays, Korea has an overflowing supply of food and  most Koreans don\'t suffer from hunger. However homelesses, poor seniors who live alone and children from struggling families still suffer from hunger. >> However, homeless people, poor seniors who live alone and children from struggling families still suffer from hunger. I think starving children is a most serious problem. >> I think starving children is the most serious problem. Because the lack of nutritions affects children\'s growth. >> Because the lack of nutrients affects a child\'s growth. OR>> Because the lack of nutrients affects children\'s growth. 172,000 students can\'t pay their lunch money in korea. >> One hundred seventy two thousand students can\'t pay their lunch in Korea. Goverment discussed about the free-lunch policy in school, but it still arguable. >> The government discussed about the \" Free-lunch policy\" in school but then, it\'s still arguable. The advocates argue that goverment should provide free-lunch to all of students. >> The advocates argue that the goverment should provide free-lunch to all students. But opponents suggest the free lunch for only selected students. >> But the opponents suggest that the free lunch should only be for selected students. Goverment and many NGO provide free meal and free box lunch services for the less well off. >> The government and many NGOs provide free meals and free lunch box  services for the less well off. Goverment welfare centers hire social workers to reserch and take care of them. >> The government\'s welfare centers hire social workers to research and take care of them. Recnetly, the number of jobless 20s increase. >> Do you mean:  Recently, the number of jobless people in their twenties  in increasing. The competition to get a job is intense, so 20s spent a lots of time and money to prepare lisence or test. (get a temporary job) >> The competition in getting a job is intense so people in their 20s spend a lot of time and money in preparing for a license test. OR>>  Do you mean: The competition in getting a job is getting more and more intense so people in their 20s spend a lot of time and money in preparing for a license test just to have a temporary job. They have restrict incomes, so they absent their meals. >> They have restricted income so they skip their meals. OR>> They have limited income so they skip their meals just to save money.