homework :)
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: What is your dream in life?
Answer in 5-8 sentences.
I think I have lived for only that times or that instant until now.
But nowadays, I think what is meaningful to me, what I want to do and what I should do in my life seriously.
I’m 22 years old. I consider my future.
The most important dream is to be with the people precious to me like my family , friends and teachers.
I want I can open up myself to them and always help them.
I have a lot of things to learn such as foreign languages , education, culture and economy.
I want to be myself that always develop by studying them.
I also want to go for a trip to a lot of countries and learn to play the musical instruments.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa! Annyeong~~~ kkkkk :)
Thank you very much for doing your homework. I appreciate that you put your effort in doing this.
Just continue with this because it is really helpful in improving your English skills. Aja! ^^
I think I have lived for only that times or that instant until now.
>> My dear, do you mean to say that you haven\'t found your dream in life yet?
So, you can say...
>>In my existence, I have never thought about my dream in life.
>> OR: I have never thought about my dream until you asked me about it.
But nowadays, I think what is meaningful to me, what I want to do and what I should do in my life seriously.
>> But nowadays, I finally know what is meaningful to me, what I want to do and what I should do in my life seriously.
I’m 22 years old. I consider my future.
>> I\'m already 22 years old so I have to think about my future goals.
The most important dream is to be with the people precious to me like my family , friends and teachers.
>> The most important dream for me is to be with the people precious to me like my family , friends and teachers.
I want I can open up myself to them and always help them.
>> I want to open myself up to them and to always help them.
OR>> I want to show my true personality to them and to be able to help them whenever they need me.
I have a lot of things to learn such as foreign languages , education, culture and economy.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I have a lot of things to learn regarding other nations such as their language, education, culture and economy.
I want to be myself that always develop by studying them.
>> I want to develop my skills in learning these things.
I also want to go for a trip to a lot of countries and learn to play the musical instruments.
>> I also want to go for a trip to a lot of countries and learn to play various musical instruments.
Thank you very much for doing your homework. I appreciate that you put your effort in doing this.
Just continue with this because it is really helpful in improving your English skills. Aja! ^^
I think I have lived for only that times or that instant until now.
>> My dear, do you mean to say that you haven\'t found your dream in life yet?
So, you can say...
>>In my existence, I have never thought about my dream in life.
>> OR: I have never thought about my dream until you asked me about it.
But nowadays, I think what is meaningful to me, what I want to do and what I should do in my life seriously.
>> But nowadays, I finally know what is meaningful to me, what I want to do and what I should do in my life seriously.
I’m 22 years old. I consider my future.
>> I\'m already 22 years old so I have to think about my future goals.
The most important dream is to be with the people precious to me like my family , friends and teachers.
>> The most important dream for me is to be with the people precious to me like my family , friends and teachers.
I want I can open up myself to them and always help them.
>> I want to open myself up to them and to always help them.
OR>> I want to show my true personality to them and to be able to help them whenever they need me.
I have a lot of things to learn such as foreign languages , education, culture and economy.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I have a lot of things to learn regarding other nations such as their language, education, culture and economy.
I want to be myself that always develop by studying them.
>> I want to develop my skills in learning these things.
I also want to go for a trip to a lot of countries and learn to play the musical instruments.
>> I also want to go for a trip to a lot of countries and learn to play various musical instruments.
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