Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!
Well I am happy that you would have your summer vacation already.
I am very sure that you would enjoy it.
You have to tell me a lot of stories once you will have your lesson with me again.
But I am also sad since I would not talk to you for quite a long time too.
Anyway, you would still come back isn\'t it so 1 month is not a long time.
I would still be here don\'t worry.
I will be waiting for you Ms. [Name]!
So for now, hope you will have fun on your trip.
Make the most out of it and be careful too.
I am going to hear from you soon. Take care! \",)
Always,
Kathrine ^^
1. Karen is rich; however, her cousin Kate is poor.
>> correct!
2. You\'d better take a taxi. othewise, you\'ll arrive late.
>> correct!
3. I enjoy reading this new magazine. moreover, it has good articles.
>> correct!
4. Jack wasn\'t tired. neverthless, he took a nap.
>> correct!
5. Phil was not thirsty; however, he drank five glasses of water.
>> correct!
6. The kids didn\'t study. therefore, they failed the course.
>> correct!
7. The weather was terrible. therefore, we decided to delay our trip.
>> correct!
8. You must buy the tickets; although, we won\'t be able to see that play.
>> otherwise
9. The neighborhood isn\'t very interesting. I like the house, though.
>> correct!
10. We live in the same building; however, we hardly see each other.
>> correct!
Thank you.
>> correct!
I don\'t want to go to the Disney land in Tokyo but my husband really want that.
>> I don\'t want to go to the Disneyland in Tokyo but my husband really wants to go.
Therefore, I bought tcikets on the internet.
>> correct!
The web site is written in English but I read all and undertand.
>> The website is written in English but I read all and I was able to understand.
I feel really great.
>> correct!
>> or; it feels really great.
Thanks for your help for a long time.
>> correct!
See you again after one month.
>> correct!
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