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2014-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Karen is rich; however, her cousin Kate is poor. 2. You'd better take a taxi. othewise, you'll arrive late. 3. I enjoy reading this new magazine. moreover, it has good articles. 4. Jack wasn't tired. neverthless, he took a nap. 5. Phil was not thirsty; however, he drank five glasses of water. 6. The kids didn't study. therefore, they failed the course. 7. The weather was terrible. therefore, we decided to delay our trip. 8. You must buy the tickets; although, we won't be able to see that play. 9. The neighborhood isn't very interesting. I like the house, though. 10. We live in the same building; however, we hardly see each other. Thank you. I don't want to go to the Disney land in Tokyo but my husband really want that. Therefore, I bought tcikets on the internet. The web site is written in English but I read all and undertand. I feel really great. Thanks for your help for a long time. See you again after one month.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Well I am happy that you would have your summer vacation already.
I am very sure that you would enjoy it.

You have to tell me a lot of stories once you will have your lesson with me again.

But I am also sad since I would not talk to you for quite a long time too.
Anyway, you would still come back isn\'t it so 1 month is not a long time.
I would still be here don\'t worry.

I will be waiting for you Ms. [Name]!

So for now, hope you will have fun on your trip.
Make the most out of it and be careful too.

I am going to hear from you soon. Take care! \",)


Always,

Kathrine ^^


1. Karen is rich; however, her cousin Kate is poor.
>>  correct!
2. You\'d better take a taxi. othewise, you\'ll arrive late.
>>  correct! 
3. I enjoy reading this new magazine. moreover, it has good articles.
>>  
correct! 
4. Jack wasn\'t tired. neverthless, he took a nap.
>>  correct! 
5. Phil was not thirsty; however, he drank five glasses of water.
>>  correct! 
6. The kids didn\'t study. therefore, they failed the course.
>>  correct! 
7. The weather was terrible. therefore, we decided to delay our trip.
>>  correct! 
8. You must buy the tickets; although, we won\'t be able to see that play.
>>  otherwise
9. The neighborhood isn\'t very interesting. I like the house, though.
>>  correct! 
10. We live in the same building; however, we hardly see each other.
>>  correct! 
Thank you.
>>  correct! 
 I don\'t want to go to the Disney land in Tokyo but my husband really want that.

>>  I don\'t want to go to the Disneyland in Tokyo but my husband really wants to go.  

Therefore, I bought tcikets on the internet.

>>  correct!

The web site is written in English but I read all and undertand.

>>  The website is written in English but I read all and I was able to understand.

I feel really great.

>>  correct!

>> or; it feels really great.

 Thanks for your help for a long time.

>>  correct!

See you again after one month.

>>  correct!

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