Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
One last hello Ms. [Name]!
But not yet a goodbye.
I am going to miss you.
Hope you will enjoy your summer time.
And that you would also have a good time with your roommates in the dormitory.
I will talk to you soon!
Take care a lot!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Wow, you are very quick.
>> correct!
It is first to check after class straight.
>> It is my first time to check the corrections right after the class.
I can read your feedback and homework now.
>> correct!
Do you feel comfortable asking people for things or favors expecting they\'ll say no if they don\'t want to? Or are you someone who rarely feels comfortable with asking for something, instead you wait for it to be offered?
I usually like conversation with someone.
>> I usually like to have a conversation with someone.
However, I don\'t feel comfortabal asking people for things or favors.
>> correct! (comfortable)
Moreover, if they say no, I\'m really sorry and not good.
>> Moreover, if they say no, I will feel really sorry and do not good.
Actually it is different depending on situation and people.
>> Actually it is different depending on the situation and the people.
Individualism is rampant in the mordern society.
>> correct!
We don\'t want to get a favor and give a favor.
>> correct!
Bye the way, I don\'t like this situation.
>> correct!
We have to live together so sharing something is natural.
>> correct!
Therfore, I think that we have to be trained since childhood.
>> Therefore, I think that we have to be trained since we were young.
I have to live with someone in the dormitory in this semestar.
>> correct! (semester)
I hope to have a good time.
>> correct!
Thank you. Have a nice summer. Take care. See you again.
>> correct!
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