homework.
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Hi there my dear [이름]!
Happy Wednesday!
How are you doing today? I hope you are having a great time today..:)
By the way, you did a good job on your homework. I do agree that youngsters shouldn\'t be drinking because it may be harmful to their body and at the same time, they can might as well cause so many violence. So be very very cautious always my dear [이름]...
Talk to you again later and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
No, it should not.
>>correct
In fact, the Republic of Korea, 20 years of age or older to be legalized drinking.
>>In fact, the Republic of Korea should legalize drinking at the age of 20.
Well, eat drink at a younger age, the body is suffered damage.
>>Well, drinking at a younger age my give so many dangers.
Also, after drinking, most of the young age cause accidental offense.
>>And also after drinking, most youngsters may cause accidents.
So young people should not eat this drink.
>>So young people shouldn\'t drink.
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