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Hi Paula!!! How is everything? I was very busy recently, so I couldn't do my class. There were many reasons that it's business trip, battery discharge, meeting and so on. I am doing my homework after a long time. There are many popular shops in my country. The representive coffee shops are Starbugs, Hollys Coffee, Caffebene, Angel-in-us Coffee and so on. However, I don't like going to coffee shops. Generally, men, unlike women, doesn't like going to there. I prefers to drink than go to coffee shops. I think the price of coffee is very expensive in there. Of course, I think a taste of coffee is good. However, it isn't worth the money. It seems that the woman like to go there. I usually have about 3~4 cups of coffee for a day. I mainly use a coffee dispenser in my company. Paula! How many cups of coffee do you drink in a day? Extreme coffee may damage our health. Therefore, It is important to have properly. Bye!!!

Hi Jehee! ^.^ Happy Wednesday evening! ^^,   Being busy at work and family is a common reason for not doing our tasks. I understand it. I also sometimes don\'t do other responsibilities due to lack of time.   By the way, I think everything is fine. About your question, I drink 3 to 4 cups of coffee in a day. I am somehow a coffee addict. Hahaha ~~~ ^^   Anyway, see the corrections and suggestions below. See you in our class! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi Paula!!!>> CORRECT!How is everything?>> CORRECT!I was very busy recently, so I couldn\'t do my class.>> I was very busy recently, so I couldn\'t have my class.There were many reasons that it\'s business trip, battery discharge, meeting and so on.>> There were many reasons such as business trips, low battery, meetings and so on.I am doing my homework after a long time.>> CORRECT!There are many popular shops in my country.>> CORRECT!The representive coffee shops are Starbugs, Hollys Coffee, Caffebene, Angel-in-us Coffee and so on.>> The coffee shops are Starbucks, Hollys Coffee, Coffee Bean, Angel-in-us Coffee and so on.However, I don\'t like going to coffee shops.>> CORRECT!Generally, men, unlike women, doesn\'t like going to there.>> Generally, men, unlike women, don\'t like going there. >> OR: Generally, men, unlike women, don\'t like going to those places.I prefers to drink than go to coffee shops.>> I prefer to drink than to go to coffee shops.I think the price of coffee is very expensive in there.>> I think the price of coffee is very expensive there. >> OR: I think the price of coffee there is very expensive.Of course, I think a taste of coffee is good.>> Of course, I think the taste of coffee is good.However, it isn\'t worth the money.>> CORRECT!It seems that the woman like to go there.>> It seems that women like going there.I usually have about 3~4 cups of coffee for a day.>> I usually have 3 to 4 cups of coffee in a day.I mainly use a coffee dispenser in my company.>> I mainly use the coffee dispenser in my company.Paula! How many cups of coffee do you drink in a day?>> CORRECT! >> OR: Paula, how many cups of coffee do you drink in a day?Extreme coffee may damage our health.>> Extreme intake of coffee may damage our health.Therefore, It is important to have properly.>> Therefore, it is important to drink it moderately.Bye!!! >> CORRECT!