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This is my final presention script. Could you check if it correct? I goinn to argue that we should raise our minimum wage to W10.000 per hour in Korea. Thanks for coming. Today, Da-yeon and I are going to discuss that "Should the minimum wage be raised to W10,000 per hour?" Imagine that you are a breadwinner who have to earn money for your one family, and you have three other family member including your wife, husband, parents or children. How much money do you think cost to live in a month? W500.000? W1,000,000? W1.500.000? W2,000,000? Keep your answer in mind, now I will start my argue that "We have to raise our minimum wage to w10,000 per hour." Especially I focus on "the minimum cost of living" and "the subsistence level". So I going to give you these three reasons to back this up. Let's get started, shall we?

Good morning! Wow, you really are preparing for your tests. Keep up the good work! Keep on being eager to learn. ^^, I corrected your sentences. Please go over it. See you! ~T. Jessie~ This is my final presention script. >> Correct!Could you check if it correct? >> Could you check if its correct?I goinn to argue that we should raise our minimum wage to W10.000 per hour in Korea.>> I am going to argue  that we should raise our minimum wage from _____ to W10.000 per hour in Korea. OR>> I am going to argue  that our minimum wage should be W10,000 per hour in Korea. Thanks for coming. >> Correct!Today, Da-yeon and I are going to discuss that \"Should the minimum wage be raised to W10,000 per hour?\" >> Today, Da-yeon and I are going to discuss about raising the minimum wage to W10,000 per hour. OR>> Today, Da-yeon and I are going to discuss the question \" Should the minimum wage be raised to W10,000 per hour?\"Imagine that you are a breadwinner who have to earn money for your one family, and you have three other family member including your wife, husband, parents or children. >> Imagine that you are the breadwinner of your family, and you have family members which include your wife or husband, parents and children. How much money do you think cost to live in a month? >> How much money do you think do you need to live in a month?W500.000? W1,000,000? W1.500.000? W2,000,000? >> W500,000? W1,000,000? W1,500,000? W2,000,000?Keep your answer in mind, now I will start my argue that \"We have to raise our minimum wage to w10,000 per hour.\" >> Keep your answer in mind, now I will start my argument. I believe that we have to raise our minimum wage to w10,000 per hour.Especially I focus on \"the minimum cost of living\" and \"the subsistence level\". >> I focused on the \"the minimum cost of living\" and \"the subsistence level\".So I going to give you these three reasons to back this up. >> So I am going to give you these three reasons to back up my opinion. Let\'s get started, shall we? >> Correct!