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2014-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

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강사 첨삭

Hi Tom! Oh my god! Wow! Eighteen goals!!!! Yahoo!! I am so proud of you! Keep up the good work. I think you can be a soccer player in the future! I can\'t wait to talk to you. Have a marvelous evening! Teacher NIna   even Sam >> Correct!even if >> even thoughonly >> Correct!even it >> Correct! ( even if ^^)she even >> Correct!a child ever >> Even a child evenI >> I even he even >> Correct!even when >> Correct!Even though>> Correct!Today,we played soccer again. >> Correct!This time,I had three goals. >> Correct!Now,I had eighteenth goals. >> Now, I had eighteen goals. My friends was surprised to know that. >> Correct!

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