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Absolutely, i don\'t agree these.
>>I absolutely don\'t agree with this.
Until now, most people in their life, we saw the diet will experience.
>>Nowadays, most people go for a diet.
If there are the efforts of individuals, obesity isn\'t occur.
>>If people do something about this, they wont get obese.
For example, when i was a kid, i was a fat.
>>correct
Just observe the proper capitalization of I.
And i was unhealthy.
>>correct
Just observe the proper capitalization of I.
So i tried to excercise for myself because i think that this shouldn\'t be alive.
>>So I tried to exercise not to experience this.
Before health so hard and now i have a healthy body.
>>Before I was not healthy and I believe already have a healthy body.
Therefore,obesity isn\'t a disease.
>>correct
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