homework
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What do you think are the most important qualities a leader should have (and why)?
In my opinion, a leader should have an ability to listen to other's thoughts. No one can be perfect alone. It means that everyone needs each other to solve problems which they have. Therefore, a leader should be humble and have an attitude to solve the problem together, not dictatorially.
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Happy Friday, [이름]!
Thank you for your opinion about this topic!
I agree that a leader must be an open-minded person. He must be a person with a broad mind to understand other people\'s thoughts.
He must also have self-direction and the ability to motivate other people for a good cause.
See you later in class!
~Teacher Shanee
What do you think are the most important qualities a leader should have (and why)?In my opinion, a leader should have an ability to listen to other\'s thoughts.
>>> Correct!
>>> In my opinion, a leader should have the ability to listen to other people\'s opinions.
No one can be perfect alone.
>>> OR: No one is an island.
>>> OR: No one can stand alone.
It means that everyone needs each other to solve problems which they have.
>>> It means that everyone needs other people to solve the problems that he or she has.
>>> OR: It means that every person needs other people in solving his/her problems.
Therefore, a leader should be humble and have an attitude to solve the problem together, not dictatorially.
>>> Therefore, a leader should be humble and has a positive attitude in solving problems.
>>> OR: Therefore, a leader should be humble and knows how to enlist the help of other people.
>>> OR: Therefore, a leader shouldbe down to earth and he must know how to consider the ideas of other people regarding a situation or problem.
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