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First, I will show you the several answers about my introduction question. The minimum cost of living per month which government announced is W1,440,000. And the amount according to Korean thought is W2,300,000. However, in 2014, the present minimum wage per hour is W5,210. If calculate it to per month is W1,088,890. It's lower than minimum cost of living! Let's check our hoped for minimum wage per month is W2,090,000. That is a little bit higher than the minimum cost announced by government and little bit lower than the minimum cost that people felt actually. If a man work everyday in the hoped for minimum wage, he just earn the degree of minimum wage. And the minimum cost of some stable living is W3,444,000. However, people's average wage in seoul is W3,300,000. Now you can see the wage is not enough and many Korean doesn't satisfy their wage.
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First, I will show you the several answers about my introduction question.
>> First, I will show you several answers about the question.
OR>> First, I will show you several answers about my topic.
The minimum cost of living per month which government announced is W1,440,000.
>> The minimum cost of living per month which the government announced is W1,440,000.
And the amount according to Korean thought is W2,300,000.
>> And the amount according to Koreans is W2,300,000.
OR>> And most Koreans thought that it\'s W2,300,000.
However, in 2014, the present minimum wage per hour is W5,210.
>> Correct!
If calculate it to per month is W1,088,890.
>> If we calculate it per month, it is W1,088,890.
It\'s lower than minimum cost of living!
>> It\'s lower than the minimum cost of living!
Let\'s check our hoped for minimum wage per month is W2,090,000.
>> How about our expected minimum wage per month which is W2,090,000?
That is a little bit higher than the minimum cost announced by government and little bit lower than the minimum cost that people felt actually.
>> It is a little bit higher than the minimum cost of living announced by the government and a little bit lower than the minimum cost of living that people thought.
If a man work everyday in the hoped for minimum wage, he just earn the degree of minimum wage.
>> If a man works everyday, he just earns the minimum wage.
And the minimum cost of some stable living is W3,444,000.
>> And the minimum cost of living is W3,444,000.
However, people\'s average wage in seoul is W3,300,000.
>> Correct!
Now you can see the wage is not enough and many Korean doesn\'t satisfy their wage.
>> Now you can see that the wage is not enough and many Koreans are not satisfied with it.
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