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2014-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Let's look at more farther and deeper. here is another graph which shows people's thinking about how much they afford than the minimum cost of living. 49% people felt their income is below the minimum cost of living. Over half of Korean feel they have no money to live to the minimum. Secondly, we could consider the subsistence level of Korean. What is the subsistence level? A family on the subsistence level can't be able to afford many things such like enjoying their hobbies, buying some extra luxury goods. Because it is too expensive to them to have a leisurely living. In Korea the gap between the rich and poor is ever growing. Raising the minimum wage and raising the standard of living of Korean could be a solution to break a intergenerational transfer of wealth.

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Good morning! Have you memorized the first part already? kkk!^^, Please do eat your breakfast before working hard. ^^, See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Let\'s look at more farther and deeper. >> Let\'s look at it  farther and deeper. here is another graph which shows people\'s thinking about how much they afford than the minimum cost of living. >> Here is another graph which shows people\'s thinking on how much  they can afford compared to the minimum cost of living 49% people felt their income is below the minimum cost of living. >> Forthy nine percent of people feel that their income is below the minimum cost of living. Over half of Korean feel they have no money to live to the minimum. >> Over half of Koreans feel that they don\'t have enough money to live comfortably. Secondly, we could consider the subsistence level of Korean. >> Secondly, we should consider the subsistence level of Koreans. What is the subsistence level? >> Correct! OR>> Do you mean: What is subsistence level? A family on the subsistence level can\'t be able to afford many things such like enjoying their hobbies, buying some extra luxury goods. >> A family on the subsistence level can\'t  afford many things such as enjoying their hobbies and buying some luxurious goods. Because it is too expensive to them to have a leisurely living. >> Because it is too expensive for them to live leisurely. In Korea the gap between the rich and poor is ever growing. >> In Korea the gap between the rich and the poor is ever growing. Raising the minimum wage and raising the standard of living of Korean could be a solution to break a intergenerational transfer of wealth. >> Raising the minimum wage and raising the standard of living of Koreans could be the solution in breaking the intergenerational transfer of wealth.

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