homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In conclusion, I argued that we have to raise the minimum wage to W10,000 to reduce the gap between the rich and poor. So I gave you three reasons to back this up. Here is my reference list. Thanks for listening my presentation. now, Dayeon will lead the opponent perspective.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Finally! I\'m finished checking them.
Please go over it.
Good luck on your presentation.
Just enjoy it and don\'t be nervous.
You can do that [이름]! Fighting!
~T. Jessie~
In conclusion, I argued that we have to raise the minimum wage to W10,000 to reduce the gap between the rich and poor.
>> In conclusion, I believe that we have to raise the minimum wage to W10,000 to reduce the gap between the rich and the poor.
So I gave you three reasons to back this up.
>> Correct!
Here is my reference list.
>> Correct!
OR>> Here are my references.
Thanks for listening my presentation.
>> Thanks for listening to my presentation.
now, Dayeon will lead the opponent perspective.
>> Now, Dayeon will lead the opponent\'s perspective.
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