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2014-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

From when i was a kid, i lived with my sister. My parents too have been busy and have less time to be with me. I really hated this. But now, i appreciate it. Because while i spend alone, i learned many things about cooking, cleaning,washing and etc. One of the most important thing is that i learned to be independent by myself. It is a very nice advantage in the world to live. ^^

강사 첨삭

TGI Friday!

Wow! I am so impressed with what you have shared to me...

I know baby that everything happens for a reason. And now you grew up a very responsible person...

I hope you will keep that in mind baby...

I can\'t wait to talk to you again later...

Take care and have a great weekend.

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

From when i was a kid, i lived with my sister.

>>Since I was a kid, I have lived with my sister.
My parents too have been busy and have less time to be with me.

>>correct

I really hated this.
>>correct
But now, i appreciate it.

>>correct

Because while i spend alone, i learned many things about cooking, cleaning,washing and etc.

>>Because while living alone i have learned many things like cooking, cleaning, washing, etc.
One of the most important thing is that i learned to be independent by myself.

>>One of the most important things is that i learned to be independent.
It is a very nice advantage in the world to live. ^^

>>correct

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