homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jehee! ^.^
Happy Friday! ^^,
Frankly speaking, I feel a little down today.
I am just trying to be happy and energetic.
Did my acting work? Hahaha ~~~ ^^
I really love Korean dramas and movies.
I know the actor and actress that you indicated on your composition.
They are the stars in the Korean drama \'My Love from the Star\'.
That drama is really interesting.
The scenes there are really cute.
I like the way they fight with each other in the drama.
I really like them. ^^
By the way, please don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions below!
Anyway, see you soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula .... ^.~
Hi Paula!
>> CORRECT!
How is everything?
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: How is everything today?
My company give us a vacation for a week from next week.
>> My company gives us a vacation for a week from next week.
>> OR: My company gives us a one week vacation starting next week.
>> OR: My company gives us a one week vacation starting on Monday.
It\'s our summer ordinary leave.
>> CORRECT!
Unfortunately, I cannot have a vacation because I have to do my work by next week.
>> Unfortunately, I can\'t have a vacation, because I have to do my work by next week.
However, I am not sad owing to compensatory time.
>> CORRECT!
My vacation is scheduled for a week from August 8.
>> CORRECT!
I usually like watching dramas or entertainment programs for break time.
>> I usually like watching dramas or entertainment programs during my break.
Without any thought, When I watch dramas, I can empty my mind.
>> Without any thought, when I watch dramas, I can empty my mind.
Nowdays, a lot of dramas of the korea are exported to abroad.
>> Nowadays, a lot of Korean dramas are seen abroad.
Paula!, Do you like a korea drama?
>> Paula, do you like a Korean drama?
>> OR: Paula, do you like Korean dramas?
>> OR: Paula, do you like watching Korean dramas?
Recently, There was the korea drama of leading actors, [이름]soohyun, junjihyun.
>> Recently, there was the Korean drama of the leading actors, [이름] Soo-hyun and Jun Ji-hyun.
I know the drama received many love, particularly in China.
>> I know the drama received a lot of love, particularly in China.
Do you know this drama?
>> CORRECT!
My wife also loved this drama very much.
>> CORRECT!
Although it\'s same drama, drama title is different in korea and other countries.
>> Although it\'s the same drama, the title of the program is different here in Korea and other countries.
Anyway, I am happy when watching good dramas.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Anyway, I am happy when I watch good dramas.
Thank you!
>> CORRECT!
Bye!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you!
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