homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I studied hard today.
getting 100 score on my test is my goal.
I'll study hard and get 100 score.
Going Seoul callege is my dream
강사 첨삭
Good evening Tom!
Wow! That\'s the spirit!
Yes, don\'t worry. I know that you will reach your goal.
It is because you are always doing your best. Keep it up!
If you need some help especially in English, please let me know.Take Care!Teacher Nina
I studied hard today.
>> Correctgetting 100 score on my test is my goal.
>> Correct
>> OR: Getting a perfect score in the test is my goal. I\'ll study hard and get 100 score.
>> Correct
>> OR: I\'ll study hard and get a great score. Going Seoul callege is my dream
>> Going to Seoul University is my dream.
>> OR: Entering Seoul University is my dream.
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